oh my heart. this moves me. i love how many times you use "almost" and "breath".beautiful.beautiful.beautiful.
Miss Ann, I remember the first sestina I ever heard and it took my breath away. Yours had the same effect. Beautiful. Sestinas are very challenging; you have a real gift. Loves!
Really beautiful: I lvoe the running theme of breath and breathing, it makes it almost pulse. Well done girl!
it feels like another day and time, lovely poem.
you are very talented, lady! just lovely.
You are finding your voice and it is oh so lovely.Sharon C
how wonderful!
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oh my heart. this moves me. i love how many times you use "almost" and "breath".
beautiful.beautiful.beautiful.
Miss Ann, I remember the first sestina I ever heard and it took my breath away. Yours had the same effect. Beautiful. Sestinas are very challenging; you have a real gift.
Loves!
Really beautiful: I lvoe the running theme of breath and breathing, it makes it almost pulse. Well done girl!
it feels like another day and time, lovely poem.
you are very talented, lady! just lovely.
You are finding your voice and it is oh so lovely.
Sharon C
how wonderful!
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